tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19834984.post3321365426423349625..comments2023-11-02T15:07:01.966+05:30Comments on Mission: Happyness: Pin PrickAnuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07871617136335902135noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19834984.post-7385807454109442352007-05-21T12:53:00.000+05:302007-05-21T12:53:00.000+05:30I shall be weighing my words the next time we spea...I shall be weighing my words the next time we speak... and will put in utmost effort to disguise the complex you have created through this poem in me!! <BR/><BR/>**salutes** :)vidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18329326796060880340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19834984.post-51332180349575102522007-05-20T00:47:00.000+05:302007-05-20T00:47:00.000+05:30Every prick counts,Be it with a pin or a mere mock...Every prick counts,<BR/>Be it with a pin or a mere mock,<BR/>The marks make you what you are,<BR/>The marks make a sculpture from the rock.<BR/>And hence, everyone you meet,<BR/>is a sculptor who made the clock.<BR/><BR/>So you tick around,<BR/>whirling in circles, rolling a ball,<BR/>Praising some, cursing some,<BR/>licking the scars, remembering the call,<BR/>But the marks make you what you are,<BR/>So donot forget to thank them all.<BR/><BR/>There are graves everywhere,<BR/>for everyone, so there is no shame,<BR/>The storm passes, the memories fade,<BR/>They dont hurt anymore in the flickering flame,<BR/>When the day comes and he calls,<BR/>for all the sculptors, it's end game.sravanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05783937992233182066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19834984.post-83811883860756312652007-05-16T16:06:00.000+05:302007-05-16T16:06:00.000+05:30I read my poem again and i dont think i wrote it t...I read my poem again and i dont think i wrote it to elevate the pin prick part...<BR/>A person who manipulates people to hide his flaws. People do not have the time or energy to analyse such people. They are hurt but they move on cause it meant nothing to them. Just a pin prick!Anuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07871617136335902135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19834984.post-80323369530399733002007-05-16T15:42:00.000+05:302007-05-16T15:42:00.000+05:30hmmm I see some details. The poem is beautiful. Is...hmmm I see some details. The poem is beautiful. Is it me who can read between the lines and perhaps assuming again, or do u think there's an intention behind? In either case Prick was the chateau of novelty.....ummm maybe needs just a little renovation and u never know if it restores it lost glory in the near future.... :) I know I think too much but still...~P~https://www.blogger.com/profile/06308254785141817611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19834984.post-36332805558716731442007-05-16T12:05:00.000+05:302007-05-16T12:05:00.000+05:30You are turning out to be my muse.. simply superb....You are turning out to be my muse.. simply superb..every word is so elavated, i mean i can fel it.. <BR/>brilliantly written.. dont publish it, they will scrutinise every word and take out a thousand meaniings, this one only you know what you actually mean..Me Thinks..https://www.blogger.com/profile/05829743480722512849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19834984.post-9657389685993943552007-05-15T23:34:00.000+05:302007-05-15T23:34:00.000+05:30first things first... thank you for remembering th...first things first... thank you for remembering the prick!!!:D<BR/>Second I second Crumbs!!!<BR/>Third Prude is just being her bizzare biologist self...<BR/>fourthly, the plunge of a nail<BR/>the prick of a pin<BR/>the gush of blood or the trickle of a stream<BR/>warm blood flows<BR/>reminiscing the pain of the cold heart and the scalding blow,<BR/>storms will burn, Fires will freeze<BR/>pain shall be eternal<BR/>deny it...<BR/>forgetting will re-bleed trickle or the gush.<BR/>the frown of chill, the fear of the freezing grin will halt the gush and the trickle...<BR/>Fifth, Emily dickinson is partying her protege and the reigning queenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19834984.post-13673279786693449432007-05-15T20:40:00.000+05:302007-05-15T20:40:00.000+05:30Beautiful. Pin pricks are always underestimated......Beautiful. <BR/>Pin pricks are always underestimated...the wounds that most believe will be forgotten quickly but those that leave a scar invisible and deeper than any. A tiny prick...and u can trickle drops of blood for eternity if you don't have just the right cells to create clotting.Pavitrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02952326373520119483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19834984.post-53324909430991538982007-05-15T18:40:00.000+05:302007-05-15T18:40:00.000+05:30@Crumbs: As I said Bingo!!! and the person is a li...@Crumbs: As I said Bingo!!! and the person is a lil more sinister than just hiding his flaw!!! i couldnt get that in the poem. thanks for the compliment though!!!:)Anuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07871617136335902135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19834984.post-40242915959038609362007-05-15T18:28:00.000+05:302007-05-15T18:28:00.000+05:30i absolutely bow down to the sheer brilliance of t...i absolutely bow down to the sheer brilliance of this stuff tsu!<BR/>an extremely powerful statement.<BR/>as i said, the image could not be more clear.<BR/>a strong manipulative figure who uses u too show his power, all the while trying to hide and deal with his inadequacy. awesome.<BR/><BR/>i repeat, u MUST publish. we need some new names in the OE text books anyways :Dcrumbshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17859064028034751891noreply@blogger.com