However Forlorn

29 August, 2007

The follicles that acknowledge
Presence felt in the upraising
Shuddering/Surrendering to the physical truths
Immensely profound
Carnal however born

Water dripping through the wetness
Slithering within the zenith
Cravings of unbearable intensity
Unreachable infinity
Carnal however sown

Visions of the emotion
As a person in being
Twilights of least measure
Copulating silence
Carnal however torn

Freed from senses
Slap scarring the iris
Restricted to melancholy
Learned realities
Carnal however forlorn

4 Scribbles:

Prude said...

Bold. Very Bold.
I likey!! :)

Me Thinks said...

last stanza mind-blowing..
Just how do u think like this?
brilliant stuff..

sravan said...

goosebumps readin ur english! u r fashhhhhhhtly becoming my benchmark!

Arcane Crapper said...

Interesting...

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