Cheeni Kum

22 August, 2007





I shudder and shake
Capacity to give but life to take
Ignore me and I will be gone
Like a wisp in the sunlight

Remains of whom
Weaving into the nook of loom
Floating dreams tender
Existence never could prove

Jammed gates fly open
Love feels an exchangeable token
Passion for another with ease
Overcome passage a fiery rival

Ignore me and I will be gone
Ignore me and I will remain
Temporarily during insanity
Temporarily during pain

Approving of the hints
On cue exits stage
Remember me rarely
In a insignificant moment
I lose contact
As a passing wave of discomfort
Careless and side tracked
Like a wisp in the sunlight.
I will remain

5 Scribbles:

sravan said...

"Ignore me and I will be gone
Like a wisp in the sunlight"

- nice attitude - strikes similarities - synchronized emotions.

Tsu said...

@Sravan: I can only threaten no balls to leave and even more scared to know that the other person would let me go as well..!!!

sravan said...

sometimes, u wud juz want 2 leave n let go - like d lady in d post below feelin sick in her stomach - beter 2 stay happy away than b sad 2gether. i mean v cant accept it unless v feel tat way.

Prude said...

Remember me rarely
in an insignificant moment...
couldn't have made it all more significant.
:)

crumbs said...

"Ignore me and I will be gone
Ignore me and I will remain
Temporarily during insanity
Temporarily during pain "

how is it that you can write what everyone just feels?

i dont like rhyme. but. u. rock.

Raise your Shoulders and Fall back on your Knees, Piss through a Dime For the Whole World Sees