Cheeni Kum
22 August, 2007
I shudder and shake
Capacity to give but life to take
Ignore me and I will be gone
Like a wisp in the sunlight
Remains of whom
Weaving into the nook of loom
Floating dreams tender
Existence never could prove
Jammed gates fly open
Love feels an exchangeable token
Passion for another with ease
Overcome passage a fiery rival
Ignore me and I will be gone
Ignore me and I will remain
Temporarily during insanity
Temporarily during pain
Approving of the hints
On cue exits stage
Remember me rarely
In a insignificant moment
I lose contact
As a passing wave of discomfort
Careless and side tracked
Like a wisp in the sunlight.
I will remain
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"Ignore me and I will be gone
Like a wisp in the sunlight"
- nice attitude - strikes similarities - synchronized emotions.
@Sravan: I can only threaten no balls to leave and even more scared to know that the other person would let me go as well..!!!
sometimes, u wud juz want 2 leave n let go - like d lady in d post below feelin sick in her stomach - beter 2 stay happy away than b sad 2gether. i mean v cant accept it unless v feel tat way.
Remember me rarely
in an insignificant moment...
couldn't have made it all more significant.
:)
"Ignore me and I will be gone
Ignore me and I will remain
Temporarily during insanity
Temporarily during pain "
how is it that you can write what everyone just feels?
i dont like rhyme. but. u. rock.
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