03 February, 2007

I stand at a point of no return
turn to look back once
I lose my foot in front of me

shrivelled skin,
shrunk heart
eyes blinking continuously
cant move further
oscillating between worlds
not yours
searching for a portal out
quicksand lazily pulling u down...

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Prude said...

Brilliant. Most would say it is slightly pessimistic....but I'd say its one of the most forward lookin poems i've read. The struggle becomes evident only when you decide and are ready to move ahead. :)

Me Thinks.. said...

Iam glad you posted it as it is...
you know what I mean..

Raise your Shoulders and Fall back on your Knees, Piss through a Dime For the Whole World Sees