21 February, 2007

There is something scary,
Unnerving with the word forever
Obsolence prevails in the mind
When the heart denies.

It could be now
Today, a hundred years from now.
Erratic and unpredictable
And yet we move forward

Mankind is filled with fools
Drawing a thin line
Between optimism and death
Struggle lasting forever…

5 Scribbles:

pRicky said...

mankind filled with fools - tick
drawing a thin line between optimism and death- tick...
struggle ending for one becoming anothers...

Prude said...

obsolence prevails in the mind when the heart denies...struggle lasting forever...
most articulate poem.
Forever...
I believe yet I don't believe...no I don't want to...wait...i want to believe but I don't allow myself to believe.

Arcane Crapper said...

A thin line between optimism and death?

Really? You think so?

Tsu said...

@pricky: one becomin anothers only if u take it on ureself. each person has his own struggle in his own time
@prude: whatever it is be true to ureself in ure heart and mind. soul in peace
@AC: yeah i think so
when all hopes lost: http://www.fellowmaninternational.com/when_all_hope_is_lost.htm

Tsu said...

@pricky: one becomin anothers only if u take it on ureself. each person has his own struggle in his own time
@prude: whatever it is be true to ureself in ure heart and mind. soul in peace
@AC: yeah i think so
when all hopes lost: http://www.fellowmaninternational.com/when_all_hope_is_lost.htm

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